aussie_lurker (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} aussie_lurker) wrote in 11fifty, |
Gender Transformation Vid
OK, saw the TG vid and-though its not "my thing"-I'd rate it as very good, but with room for improvement. My only real beefs were (a) the blokes reactions to his feminized hands were unconvincing and (b) the Greenscreen was a little too obvious in that same seen (at 2 points part of the female hand disappears).
Destiny's reactions were pure GOLD, she really does a GREAT JOB. Also, the morphing you did have was very, very high quality-it's really great to see it again. If you were to revisit this scenario, this is how I would storyboard it:
Start-as you already have it: bloke finds strange bottle whilst cleaning the attic. Then he opens it, sniffs it, and his repulsed by the foul odour. The strength of his response causes him to spill the liquid in the bottle over his hands, shirt and pants.
Middle 1-He considers removing some or all of his clothing-cut to a top (or side) view of his hands. His hands and the top part of the arms morph from man hands to slender female hands/arms. The next part of this scene has him reacting strongly to his changed hands.
Middle 2-Cut to the chest as he grows boobs (as you did in this vid). Then cut to his legs and midriff to show his lower body morphing into that of a woman.
End-The full reaction scene where the newly transformed "Man-Lady" is first repulsed by "his" change, then considers the *benefits* of "his" new form (as you did in this vid). Make each section roughly 2-3 minutes in length and I reckon that would be brilliant.
Anyway, really did enjoy this clip, and it seems to me like you've already got the hang of the new morphing technology. Look forward to seeing more use of it in future vids :).
Aussie.
OK, saw the TG vid and-though its not "my thing"-I'd rate it as very good, but with room for improvement. My only real beefs were (a) the blokes reactions to his feminized hands were unconvincing and (b) the Greenscreen was a little too obvious in that same seen (at 2 points part of the female hand disappears).
Destiny's reactions were pure GOLD, she really does a GREAT JOB. Also, the morphing you did have was very, very high quality-it's really great to see it again. If you were to revisit this scenario, this is how I would storyboard it:
Start-as you already have it: bloke finds strange bottle whilst cleaning the attic. Then he opens it, sniffs it, and his repulsed by the foul odour. The strength of his response causes him to spill the liquid in the bottle over his hands, shirt and pants.
Middle 1-He considers removing some or all of his clothing-cut to a top (or side) view of his hands. His hands and the top part of the arms morph from man hands to slender female hands/arms. The next part of this scene has him reacting strongly to his changed hands.
Middle 2-Cut to the chest as he grows boobs (as you did in this vid). Then cut to his legs and midriff to show his lower body morphing into that of a woman.
End-The full reaction scene where the newly transformed "Man-Lady" is first repulsed by "his" change, then considers the *benefits* of "his" new form (as you did in this vid). Make each section roughly 2-3 minutes in length and I reckon that would be brilliant.
Anyway, really did enjoy this clip, and it seems to me like you've already got the hang of the new morphing technology. Look forward to seeing more use of it in future vids :).
Aussie.
